Editorial Board meeting
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Aula direzione (LNF)
Aula direzione
LNF
Minutes of Editorial board meeting on Dec 11, 2012
integrated with futher discussion and interactions.
Annotated list of things to do on the TDR
General timing: aim at sending the TDR to the printer in mid january
Signoff: system conveners should send me their final signoff by email
so that the chapters can be handed over to the global readers.
General style issues
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- Fix space at around the subsection titles
- Fix balancing of columns on half empty pages
(the package originally used, balance, was causing problems; maybe it is
not worthwhile to solve the problems).
- Style for common words: \SuperB, \babar
- Style for units (\gev etc.)
- Removing hanging indent for figure captions (this seems to be a problem
of some latex installations and OK in the nightly build).
- Bibliography style: provide uniform bibliographic style, including how to
indicate etal etc.
- Issue of reference to sites in small fonts
Figures
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- Figures need to have labels
- Labels need to be readable
- If there are multiple graphs a legend needs to be there
- All figures need to be referred to in the text
- Caption below figure
- After signoff Chris will check figures
Report numbers
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We should publish with several numbers
INFN (FF)
LAL (Nicolas)
SLAC (Blair)
ISBN (FF)
Arxiv submission
Tables
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- Don't force specific table style but maintain uniformity in chapter
- Caption above table
Front Matter
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- Abstract: should be centered. FF will write it
- Foreword: draft by FF - summary of project history
- Authors: draft list by ALU -
Chapter 2 - accelerator (Boscolo)
- need to implement suggestions of GW (Manuela)
- add crab waist
- add references
- fix figure and table orientation
Chapter 3 - Det overview (FF)
- fix figure of detector with hybrid forward EMC (FF)
Chapter 4 - Physics (Bevan)
- final corrections by Adrian
- beef up a bit the tau/charm section
Chapter 5 - MDI (Paoloni)
- Quite a bit of work still
- Improve radiative Bhabha description
- missing part on DCH
- fix titles
- Write 5.6 on synchrotron radiation (Manuela)
- 5.9 and 5.10 FTOF, fix ref needede (Nicolas)
- Fig 24 and 25 IFR move legend inside and fix units on x-axis (Wander)
- Remove fig 5.28
- subsubsection in 5.14 - use tdrparagraph
- fix bibliography
Chpater 6 - SVT (Rizzo)
- OK for global reading
- remove 6.1.5 heading
- Try to improve table readability (6.15,6.16,6.18)
- 6.7.8 adn 6.7.9 --> tdrparagraph. Check uniformity of levels
- 6.9 check services and utilities
Chapter 7 - DCH (Finocchiaro, Roney)
- in final reading
- several figures need to be fixed (De Sangro)
- Bibliography: beef up or check whether references are left out
Chapter 8 - PID (Arnaud, Vavra)
- ready for global reading
- Cost should be removed as soon as it appears in the budget chapter
- extra reference at the end
Chapter 9 - EMC (Cecchi, Porter)
- last last final reading ongoing
- change structure removing 9.3.1.2 level
Chapter 10 - IFR (Baldini)
- ready for global reading
- Fig 10.8, 10.10 move legend outside, increase font of axis
- table 10.9 fix the FCTS_clk that is unclear
- 10.11 remove bold
Chapter 11 - Magnet (Fabbricatore, Forti)
- insert missing table
- add references
- need final reading
Chapter 12 - ETD (Luitz, Breton)
- ready for global reading
- appendix 12.A make single column
- table 12.1 caption above
Chapter 13 - Elex (Luitz, Breton)
- Create summary text for all subsystems with reference to tables
(Steffen)
- Table 13.2 move caption
- DCH part, remove smallfont in tables
- 13.8 move caption
- Fig 13.9 and 13.10 should become tables
- Fig 13.11 remove "ASIC" in caption
- Fig 13.18 and 13.19 say in caption what to note in figure
Chapter 14 Computing (Bianchi)
- few corrections to insert
- Table 14.1 14.2 Caption above
- Setction 14.3 R&D without spaces
- p 450 - strange indent of "Data storage"
Chapter 15 - ES&H - remove
Chapter 16 Integration
- need work to update (FF+Raffaelli)
Chapter 17 Collaboration
- missing figure (Blair)
Chapter 18 cost and schedule
- all the cost is in smartsheet. A global cost table will be generated.
- Subsystems: check and update text in cost and schedule chapter
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